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why did the sea tell the sun to learn to cry (Read 1813 times)
juditha
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why did the sea tell the sun to learn to cry
Aug 27th, 2011 at 3:57am
 
hi  I wrote this poem,meaning we have to accept that not everyone thinks the same as we do and that each has his or her own freewill,and most of all we have our own destinys,including nature,that naturally shows difference and freewill.

friendship is loving those for who they are and not who we want them to be.


The Sea was raging among the storm
In the distance shined a beautiful form
The Sea was senseing the glorious Sun
"I know" thought the Sea,"I will ask the one"

"Hey" said the Sea,"Come closer Sun,don't be shy"
"I need to tell you to learn to cry"
"Sea of storms, are you talking to me"
"Tell me Sun,what your answer is"
The Sun felt confused,the Sea asking this

"Why should i learn to cry," said the Sun to the Sea
"Because my waves cry,when they skim across me"
"Well you are the Sea and i am the Sun
"I am hot all the time Sea,I feel your making fun of me

"How can i cry,when my flames keep me dry"
"So do not tell me to learn to cry"
"I am who i am and so are you"
The Sea fell silent and looked to the sky so blue

"I will not tell you to do this again"
"I'm sorry Sun,sometimes i am so vain"
From that day the Sea loved the Sun
And a beautiful friendship had now begun.

i wrote this in my writing group as the subject was
(Realising we are all different in this world),This was the topic of discussion in the group,then we had to write a poem about it and this is what i wrote.

Love and God bless  love juditha
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Re: why did the sea tell the sun to learn to cry
Reply #1 - Aug 27th, 2011 at 9:59am
 
That's beautiful, Juditha. It makes my day. So true. Thank you for sharing!

Always love, b2
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Reply #2 - Aug 30th, 2011 at 12:32am
 
Excellent poem Juditha.


   I should try to write poems too. It's a great way to be creative. I like the Sea, but I've always been a big fan of the Sun. There are times that I've meditated on the Sun, and felt a strong spiritual connection to God, as if the Sun is a direct way of communicating with God.

Ralph
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