Greetings,

Would you please help write this story I've started? You each have your own areas of expertise that would really help fill out a basic idea here----

It takes place in THE historical Final Days when "God is about done with human life as we know it." The time is now.
But before the trumpets sound and more seals are broken, we are visited by angels that tell us some surprising facts about our lives:

We did indeed begin as Pure spirit, Sparks of God. Now over those sparks we have 7 interpenetrating 'layers', the final one being clay from Earth. We will need this layer of humus to keep us  safe as we are taken to a new galaxy to begin new explorations in new dimensions. Just like a seed needs to be coated with a hull.

Backflash: God sparked us off first as small holograms of Himself into (eventually) seven balls of energy [that we call planets.] In our life on each 'planet' we explored its characteristics while becoming more like it, absorbing its energy field. Each of these lives has added one more subtle body to the being we now are. Older civilizations like the Hindus are more familiar with these bodies than we in Western civilization are.

God finds us interesting as we explore and become.    He has created us like a simpler version we know, a children's spinning top. He got us started and will make sure we do not break. But how we twirl and dance before the spin runs down has been partly up to us.
God usually thinks we're pretty as we twirl and swirl through existence, but sometimes He just thinks we're pretty stupid.

This final exploration on Earth is the most difficult, although there were times of conflict and challenge in each energy field. But Earth is a heavy matter!  
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OK. It needs more. For example,

What kind of energy does each planet contribute, and can we describe it in terms that relate to what science thinks it knows about those planets?
How much time should the story spend on each of these lives on different planets?

How does the overall story relate to the classic views of religions?  Can we include quotes from some religious sources like the Bible, etc that seem to support this story?

What types of main characters sould help show the story unfold? (Do you want to be in it?  If so, doing what?)

What are the characteristics of existence in new dimensions for after The Ascension? Do we all go to the Afterlife or do some join the beings exploring new galaxies? Would time there run backwards, for example, like some of you have reported? Were there scouts that went into the new galaxies but had trouble reporting life there due to our limited human senses?

Please add any other issues or questions that will help build this story.

Thanks, Bets

Thanks Dave !

Those are interesting frustrations an alien being would bear

Folks, maybe the intro above is worded wrong. I offer it as the beginning of
a sort of virtual reality game, where we create a whole situation. Characters
would include any you make up-- or that walk into your life, as with Dave's example. It's virtual reality --- without the visuals or special effects  
I guess that's why I called it a story.

I don't have the patience or know how to publish a story so I'm not trying to make money from it.  Also there may be copyright laws about what's written on sites. It's just a story-game for us to build! 

Bets

Hi Bets,

I thought today "let's have a look at the planets and tell Bets what I saw".
   When I phase away from the physical, I have a sort of vantage point. I'm not particularly in one of the focus levels, I can move from there into one of them. I stated my interests in the planets, and moved what felt like the direction closer to the sun, and got that this is Venus; it was orange-red, but I couldn't make out anything interesting. I moved away outwards, and it was darker, colder, stones and dust in the blackness, and one biggie, Jupiter maybe. There was a sort of thin layer of fog around it, transparent. But I couldn't sense anything like "entities", life, spirits inhabiting Jupiter. What I sensed though was a connection between the planets, they influenced each other; maybe gravitation, maybe something different. There are colors and something like tones/chords related to each planet, I heard nothing, but tones are the closest I can describe it.
   I phased a bit more off the physical to see if I could then perceive something more. Now the earth was even much more outstanding than it has been anyway, the earth was surrounded by a multicolored moving halo, swirls and protuberances, while the others were relatively uniform and weak colored, calm, not as "communicating" as the earth.
   Then I phased into a focus level, Focus 21. Fog appeared, and though I still had the planets in my mind as my subject of exploration, I couldn't find them. As well in other focus levels. They are not there. So I moved beyond F 27, where TMI says is the Gathering and the opportunity to explore space, but found this is definitely not the physical space; there might be influences of physical space somehow, but it's not physical space; it is like a space which contains other spaces, like the physical space, and the focus level space. I once was there and found an entity which communicated it was from something which appeared to me as a far away planet (not solar system) which was a sort of intelligent being, with it's "brain", or active part, on the surface of this planet, there were a kind of communication towers or something like this. So, beyond F27 one can find some weird things from who knows where. But it's not like exploring with a spaceship a la Star Trek.

Spooky