Hi Lucy, I can't comment on the book, Astral City, but it does sound like it's cloaked in the terminology of the roots of spiritism, which means we've evolved a bit from there as a whole.
as a budding writer attempting to use language in a way that suits a large audience, I see how difficult that can be. but there is something I want to comment on, your reference to "indiscriminate kindess engenders indisapline and failure." the book just left u hanging there? I feel it should have elaborated so, lol, I'll do it from my pov.
as I go thru life, people are still reflecting back to me "I am too kind, or I don't pay attention to good business practice; I sometimes forget to take my change on purpose, etc. I frequently let people off the hook even before they've hooked themselves...I make up excuses why people behave the way they do, or why they have treated me unkindly...there's committing random acts of kindness, then theres a thing called the blind leading the blind I guess and being too huggy/touchey/lovey dovey instead of asking intuition exactly what can be extended in relationship and yet not be used as a doormat to wipe your feet on by being too too easy going..well, I'm learning about balanced PUL. sometimes the worst thing u can do is kill someone with kindness, it leads to failure for sure. if u can get them to accomplish their own deed, whether it be the securement of housing, or giving them seeds to grow their own food, far better they attain self pride than accept my welfare stipend. that doesn't mean I can't be alert to opportunity to commit random acts of kindness which nourishes my own soul, it just means I have to be constantly listening to intuition and paying attention to the vision I wish to see for the world and "what is actually happening in this moment and what the situation calls for so that another can see that they are valuable and the possibilities are endless for them and for all of us.