Greetings Beau.
Nice piece of poetry. Someday I'll try my hand at poetry too. It's a nice break from the world of logic that I indulge in. I like the Superman part. I used to have dreams where I was just like Superman in them with all his powers except the x-ray eyes and laser beams shooting out of them.
I have to disagree with part of your poem though. I do not consider time as an illusion. I believe that time and space exist as a reality, but only in the physical dimension that we are currently occupying. I don't agree with Buddhism when they say this world is maya and just an illusion. Actually, I believe that is is but one part of the total reality that God has created consisting of many dimensions, inluding that which makes up the afterlife, which is the greater reality of all realities.
Ralph