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Title: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by Alan McDougall on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 9:22am
The world is poor
Her fortune is buried in the sky And all her treasure maps Are of the earth Authentic Messiahs cannot cease Their meditations on vast human hurt To heed the pain of nails Damnation, senseless Killers! Oh, for a fee Cassandra, if the worlds on fire We must save a cup of ashes for The seed. Hell’s logic consists in Preventing murdering by Murdering the murderer Heavens logic greets every Murderer with grace Dying when the time comes With beatific face. A God too large to walk in Human shoes Has outgrown hope of Human use And heavy skeptics weighted down With doubt Can never rise to God’s about A humanist in chocking sea Called for help presently Received in full intensity “You must swim, if you would be. Self –reliance makes one free “That’s nice” He said and floated easily And died I misery Evil finds a ready home Where beauty is despised And ugliness enthroned Prayer is most real when we refuse to say “Amen” We most love heaven when We will not end our Conversations quickly Who found their “Amens Close at hand Come to the court of God Having eyes unwashed with Dreams and you will see Nothing Death is the confirmation of The believer’s creed For the skeptics it is discovery Immense and too late The first sound sleep we get On earth We must be roused on realm away. Light is never given While we fear the dark. Materiality a blessing all its own. Spirit -Demons play in fire Hoping for cremation. In terror of their immortality They envy dying humanity [size=14][/size] |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by betson on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 11:09am
Greetings,
Wow, there's alot in that but that poet begins by looking in the wrong direction! I hope you didn't write it, at least not recently, Alan! :-? It's a strong poem, but it's creator is at first in a dark night of the soul. Reading it, we have to walk his walk with him and it's not through any garden! It seems towards the end that that poet's seen his 'new dawn', but he hasn't learned to fly into it yet. He has a mystic's viewpoint but not yet enough mystic experience to write a final stanza. IMO Bets |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by blink on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 12:16pm
Agreed, Bets. The line: Light is never given While we fear the dark....
It is always darkest before the dawn....but, perhaps our fear has nothing to do with it. It is the earth that turns and continually brings us a new day. When we realize that, all we have to do is wait. love, blink :) |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by LaffingRain on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 1:51pm
F-false-E-evidence-A-appearing-R-as real
FEAR= false evidence appearing as real I know, I am she who was most afraid to be myself and speak my words that I hid deep inside until I saw I would remain in fear whether I spoke my true thought or whether I hid away within my self. so I took the risk because it was 1/2 dozen of this, or 6 of that. to my surprise, though fear is still appearing as evidence, therefore seemingly real, it tends to shorten it's duration within my house of consciousness when I choose to take a risk, to merely say what I feel, in as gentle manner as I can come up with, because, without you all, and the others I come across, I would not know at all who I am, as you teach me who I am, because you show me your love. getting sentimental on ya..... :-/ |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by Alan McDougall on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 7:33pm
Blink,
No! I did not write it, it is a composite of a number of poems I have in my library that I posted for the forums interest. ALAN |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by blink on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 8:08pm
Thanks, Alan, didn't know that. Good to know where you are coming from.
I think Bets asked if you wrote this poem, but it did seem kind of pasted together to me. A little confusing. What do you mean, a composite? Just put together like that, it looks like a person should just read it straight through. Call me dense but I'll do that anytime something looks that way. love, blink :) |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by betson on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 9:51pm
Ohh-hh!
I thought it was a journey by one soul, starting with the most negative outlook, and gradually finding more hope. I wondered why the poet kept changing metaphors, but since it's poetS and they didn't know they were on a joint journey, I think it holds together pretty well! :) Bets |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by Alan McDougall on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 11:22pm
Blink,
Composite, merging make union from different sources, amalgamating etc etc alan |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by blink on Jan 24th, 2008 at 9:07am
Aha! I think I do know what merging and union are all about... :)
Oh, Alan, you are so "in your face" .... I find it absolutely arresting .... kisses, blink :) |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by juditha on Jan 24th, 2008 at 6:09pm
Hi alan,blink,bets and aylsia This is my poem i wrote
I love you God, with all my heart My beautiful saviour be The beautiful world of spirit to see Is waiting one day for me For God's heaven is eternity For love and peace and harmony Gods heaven is always filled with love Within the realms of beauty above Pray to God,he hears your prayer God listens to all you say So trust in God everyday GOD IS OUR SALVATION Love and God bless love juditha |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by blink on Jan 24th, 2008 at 8:01pm
Juditha sings! That's the best thing I've read all day!
love, blink :) |
Title: Re: Poetic words for afterlife forum Post by blink on Jan 24th, 2008 at 8:29pm
I don't know when this was written. A long time ago.
-------------- Can't trickle gotta rush full force liars in the way fill up on air throw open your face freezing on a wizened moon look past a corner notice stars how close they are bright and precarious we'll not fall can't trickle gotta rush full force cliff for an eye leap ------------------ We have some wonderful writers here. I used to doubt my work. This poem is from maybe 20 years ago. I don't doubt my words anymore. They just are. Perhaps I haven't told many of you how much I enjoy your words. You are magnificent. love, blink :) |
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